Expert emails from highly experienced copywriter

Customers are overwhelmed with copy everywhere, and I can help you cut through the clutter.  You need to explain the benefits of your product in a way that is easy to understand and inspires the consumer or client to want to learn more.  I excel at writing emails with concise, compelling content.

Check out the before and after copy of the email I wrote. The revised copy has:

• A benefits-oriented subject line
• A compelling “why” in the first sentence
• Easy to read bullets that show your competitive advantages
• Big brand names that support your expertise
• A simple and small call to action – start with a small order but show confidence they will love your products

BEFORE – Original Copy

Hi Katarzyna

How are you?!

We are a supplier of wooden kitchenware & household products based in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province, China. You can learn more on our website: www.guanjuzhe.com.

We are an established manufacturer with 250 staff specializing in two Acacia and Bamboo product lines:

1. Kitchenware – Eco-friendly – Reasonable Price
2. Household – Sturdy and Durable – Unmissable

While I understand you already have a supplier of similar items, it is always a good idea to have a backup plan.

Let us be your back up plan, because we are happy with one off purchase as well as supplying volume you need long term.

Start from filling in an enquiry form at the bottom of this page www.guanjuzhe.com

Looking forward to your enquiry.

PROPOSED REVISIONS

Subject Line Options:

• Improve your Wooden Kitchen and Housewares Supply
• A Better Source for Wooden Kitchenware

Katarzyna,

If you need high-quality chopping boards, bowls, plates, trays, and more, we want to be your supplier. We are a premier provider of acacia and bamboo kitchen and household products, based in the Zhejiang Province of China.

We offer:

• Fair pricing for single orders or long-term volume
• Study, durable, high-quality products
• Reliable order fulfilment
• Excellent customer service

See why companies like T.J. Maxx, Walmart, and LeCrueset trust our line of quality guaranteed products.

Check out our full line of products at www.guanjuzhe.com. We encourage you to start with a small one-time order to try out our products and expand from there.

Contact us on our website to get started with an order.